no goodbye

• Artist: teeka_booo
• Description: no haters
• Date: 05/16/2009
• Tags: goodbye

The days I think they cant get any worse but they do how well I dont know but they do.Its not that you left with no goodbye or that you left at all its that you left a letter and this is what it said

Dear Baby,

By the time you read this I will be gone and you cry I know but dont am not worth it
I had to go I knew you were unhappy thats why i left i will be on a plane to New York.
I start training and in six months I will be in nom I love you I always will dont forget that.
Everytime you see the sun think of me and dont cry please I did not mean to hurt you.

Your Love Chris

I cry for the next week I did not want you to leave I want to stay with me and be save with me
but I will wait for you.

Comments

[kuma]

Isn't saying no haters like...asking for haters? o.o
Punctuation helps. biggrin

[Musra]

Commas are your friend.
Though it's format is more poem like...
Try turning it into that.

[Xx Vampire RaWr xX]

I like the story only it didnt make much sense because your missing words and yeah.