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Please don't leave me
Don't walk away from me like nothing is there
Go to my room and see, that I love you
- by Confuzzled Cookies |
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- | Submitted on 04/10/2009 |
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- Title: Please Don't Go
- Artist: Confuzzled Cookies
- Description: a short poem #2
- Date: 04/10/2009
- Tags: short poem
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Mr Bong Along - 07/16/2013
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PUT up your hands
YOU got robbed sucka - Report As Spam
- AshleyIRL - 04/25/2013
- This should be in the poetry and lyrics category. The las line could use a little attention, but otherwise I really like it and think it's a neat concept.
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- VxxXxT0X1CxXxxV - 02/03/2010
- it's ok but at the ending bad
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- Fiddlededee - 12/10/2009
- Little weak in the ending...
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- Confuzzled Cookies - 11/22/2009
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you're right Sugar.. xP
I couldnt think of anything for the last part, so I blew it
LOL - Report As Spam
- fiestygirl13 - 08/20/2009
- first two r great last one not so much
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