- Title: On One Fateful Night
- Artist: XxHakaxX
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Description:
A soft blush dances across her face,
As she recalls a memory that time can not replace.
On one fateful night she snuck to Earth,
To prove to herself of her worth,
She met a human man with hair of gold,
She listened fondly to the tales he told.
What was this feeling she felt for this man,
Struggling to understand the best she can.
The man spoke and told her to stay,
But the poor soul collector could not obey,
And so she parted with a soft kiss,
In her heart the memory will always exist…. - Date: 07/11/2011
- Tags: fateful night love
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Flush Of Fuchsia - 07/24/2011
- Very nice, blush is a very good touch, the nightgown idk something about it doesn't suit it. The poem pretty nice, but i'm rating the avatar so i give you 4/5
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- 007JamesG - 07/23/2011
- touching story actually.
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- XxHakaxX - 07/23/2011
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Thank you for all your wonderful comment <3
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- Misconceptional - 07/22/2011
- Nice poem. biggrin
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- wala na - 07/21/2011
- Aw. heart I really like the description. redface
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- darky1006 - 07/20/2011
- its alright i geuse
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- Shadowslayer012 - 07/20/2011
- Hmmm, very nice.
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