- Title: La colère du serpent
- Artist: Enuna
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Description:
Sealed inside another's tomb,
The serpent came to see,
Etched upon the golden walls,
Her feathers dwindling.
Adorned with gold that turned to dust
Upon her very gaze,
The serpent screeched, moaned, and yelled
As her tail became two legs.
Reading still, her future,
No hope she came to see,
For all her life, she'd be within,
For all eternity.
I'm taking a minor in French, please tell me if I got the title wrong, provided you can tell me HOW it should be/why. Thanks, it would help a lot! - Date: 01/11/2009
- Tags: black goddess giftofthegods feather rainbow
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Comments (7 Comments)
- xXxLinLinxXx - 03/07/2009
- well u should hav been first i mean look at all thoughs ugly people they could have had one good person biggrin
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- adata - 01/25/2009
- "The snake's rage?" that's a good title! (No, you didn't get anything wrong)
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- Sakua Dana - 01/24/2009
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"Your avi's number one in my top ten for this week's winners."
Sorry. It seems that the end of my sentence was chopped off... >_>; - Report As Spam
- Sakua Dana - 01/24/2009
- Your avi should have placed first. Tropical Storm is a lovely avi, however I feel that it was a bit too cluttered. It hurt my eyes to look at it for very long. Your avi is much easier on the eyes, simpler in comparison to Tropical Storm, yet still beautiful. Beauty is simplicity. I also love your description. It's a nifty little poem to explain your avi, in my opinion. Congratulations on placing within' the top ten, regardless. Your avi's number one in my top ten for this week's
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- Opal-fire mage - 01/24/2009
- cool avi though the poem is a bit on the lame side lol sorry
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- Nephilym - 01/23/2009
- I like this one better than the one that got first. Congrats to all. ^_^
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