- Title: La colère du serpent
- Artist: Enuna
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Description:
Sealed inside another's tomb,
The serpent came to see,
Etched upon the golden walls,
Her feathers dwindling.
Adorned with gold that turned to dust
Upon her very gaze,
The serpent screeched, moaned, and yelled
As her tail became two legs.
Reading still, her future,
No hope she came to see,
For all her life, she'd be within,
For all eternity.
I'm taking a minor in French, please tell me if I got the title wrong, provided you can tell me HOW it should be/why. Thanks, it would help a lot! - Date: 01/11/2009
- Tags: black goddess giftofthegods feather rainbow
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Rapid Recovery - 01/20/2009
- Jeez a lot of the really good avatars weren't up high in the ranks, I seriously am enraged you weren't at the least third.
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- stellacadente - 01/20/2009
- Absolutely gorgeous and you, too, deserved to win first place! Too bad it couldn't have been a tie.
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- Bella Doe - 01/20/2009
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You should be switched with the first place one, because personally this is a lot better than the first place one.
Good Job. <3 - Report As Spam
- Shima Shinji - 01/20/2009
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I saw you with this avatar and immediately thought you should enter. mad d
Congrats on placing! - Report As Spam
- Xerxies - 01/19/2009
- Like the use of colors. Not sure if I like the gold eyes, but it's a small gripe on an otherwise nice avatar.
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- partychick678 - 01/19/2009
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WOW! 5/5 for you no doubt!
hope you get far! smile - Report As Spam
- [.Dancing.Panda.] - 01/19/2009
- I think this is one of the best I ever seen. D=
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