- from thanksgiving to christmass to new years day all of them are great times, after thanksgiving christmass is near, followed by a happy new year. from great food, to presents, to a great new year.
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- Holiday Poem Contest
- | Submitted on 11/28/2008 |
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- Title: happy times
- Artist: The Other stupid1
- Description: talks about the happy times of the hollidays from thanksgiving to new years day.
- Date: 11/28/2008
- Tags: happy times thanksgiving hollidays christmass
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- x0StrawberryLemonade0x - 07/28/2009
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Um. . . Okay? It could be way better if it was organized. Like broken up into lines and stanzas, and just a reminder, propper capitalization and punctuation makes everything look better and more serious.
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- apriltheangel13 - 06/23/2009
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nice
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- Narabellum - 06/12/2009
- um its ok i guess it needs some tweeks but is its still good
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- holy_spongebob_07 - 02/23/2009
- nice poem
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- Radiative - 12/19/2008
- cool poem but i'm not sure if the number of sylablles match
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