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  • Sayo Nakaharu II
  • Title: Sayo Nakaharu II
  • Artist: Seremela Calafalas
  • Description: This is another drawing of Sayo. ^_^ She is one of my favorites, I love drawing her.

    This drawing was done first in pencil, several sketches. Then I ink, and color. I like to use a white pencil crayon over the other colors to even everything out.
    Enjoy! Please comment and leave some constructive criticism, I am always trying to get better.
  • Date: 11/04/2008
  • Tags: sayo nakaharu anime girl
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Comments (7 Comments)
  • Niacinimide - 11/09/2008
  • Anything that I'd have to say is just a repeat of whatever else has been posted.
    I second everything below my post.
  • LordPsychocutioner - 11/05/2008
  • It's not bad but the hands are off. I know you already know that but it should be a line instead of a circle where the area between the pinky and wrist are. otherwise it's a good start but there's still a long way to go.
  • akitchi-chan - 11/04/2008
  • OH! forgive me. it is just as important to say that i think you are talented and i was really giving fine tunning critic. you are very good with the face, the hair rocks, and that smaller hand and it's perspective are simply amazing! 4/5 because i can see that you have the talent.
  • akitchi-chan - 11/04/2008
  • okay, i do want to say you definitely have skill to build on. you are going in thr right direction with the bigger hand to show perspective, but you are missing the foreshortening. that means the arm should look "stumpy" a bit. like you can see as much becuase it is behind the hand. then her right breast is bigger then the left. then the bigger arm's anatomy is slightly off. the arm's bend in the middle should be slanted upward. just kind of horizontally flip the arm (not hand).
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