THIS IS NO LONGER THE START OF MY STORY
This is the first chapter in script from so it will not read like a story
Page 1: background not sure yet text on page reads the town Rolan is divided into two levels, the first level or inner ring is
Sertai: the center of all royalty and suburbia
Now the outer circle or ring is Shoupo: it’s a thug town were you steal to live and live to die. But the only thing we can be sure of is rain will fall till the end of time
Page 2: you see Sakua walking, and then he jumps from rooftop to rooftop (mid jump siloet)
He lands, smoke appears. Continues to walk, gets talked by kanna (more like a big hug)
"Hay Sakua”
page 3:sakua gets up brushing off his pants" what’s up kanna"(she looks eratated while he says this” if been gone for 3 years and all you have to say is what’s up"(looking angry)."Ha-ha I’m sorry what have you been up to kanna"(sweat thing on his face) "oh I left Rolan and traveled the world"
page4:"ow learn anything"(his arm around her shoulder {IN A FREINDLY MANOR ONLY}"I learned I’m hungry "(kanna has a big smile)"weird as ever kanna"(Sakua smiling to).
(a view of their backs walking away from camera, background shows its a rundown old town)"why don’t we have sushi" Sakua says" yaw lets do that" kanna says" ok "second speech bubble for Sakua
page 5:"here it is "(Sakua close to screen with hand far back pointing to sushi restrant in background)"cool"(kanna is walking though the doorway).both Sakua and kanna sit down in the proper Japanese style (waiter is putting down sushi on the small table).you see a man walk up and Sakua it in the middle of standing up (kanna is eating sushi in background saying” man this is good" wink
page 6:both man and Sakua are bowing to each other (Sakua fully stood up and kanna is chewing down sushi very chibi like)"man says how do you like the food Sakua-san" kanna is practically jumping from her position with food flying in the air” its great” she says” its ok I haven’t tried it yet"(small speech bubble so it seems as if he is mumbling it)"I’m glad to see your back kanna-san"(old man says).She smiled with eyes closed and food next to her mouth(Sakua looked angry)"you ate all of it!! "
Page 7: Sakua and kanna leaving
Kanna: waving and saying "thanks for the food"
Sakua: grabbing his stomach" I cant believe I didn’t get any" .A girl pushes by him slamming into his shoulder and keeps running, front view of her running towards the screen(Sakua in the background yelling" watch were your going Sammy-san" .Sakua’s face” no she is not..."
Page 8:"a pic of her jumping over a giant gate
page 9: ( Sakua is angry and kanna in background confused) kanna has a question mark above her head and Sakua is yelling” that b***h is going to get us killed” guard shoves his way past Sakua. Sakua grabs his arm "were in hell do you think your going” the guard spines around to punch Sakua" let go of me” but he grabs his other wrist and kicks the guard in his face holding his arms so they ripe off .A small square of just blood spray
page 10:sakua running" kanna lets go ".She starts to run "what was that for "kanna a lot has changed in the last three years" .the square has a background pic of the dead guard and text on the screen read "a lot has changed"
page 11:you seem a door slam open and Sakua and kanna are in the entrance. then you see Sakua yelling at a guy also holding his shirt collar with his hand” why did you otherize that” the guy saying” I don’t know what your talking about".(next square)"don’t play dum with me why did you let Sammy jump over the grand gate!” look I didn’t otherize that she just did it, she is not listening to anyone anymore" Sakua: "damit that b***h"(kanna in background saying” what a nice tea shop" wink
"come with me" Sakua is saying while pulling kanna out of the tea shop and another question mark icon above kanna's head.(next square)you see kanna getting thrown into a house.(every time there is a period it means next square got it ,good )"Desmand you better have them Desmand talking "oh you mean the weapons yep they jus came” has a big smile on his face” hand them over and stop smiling” fine there in here"
page12:a door saying "changing room”. A picture of kanna and Sakua standing side by side with thier new weapons. Desmand saying” what do you think”. You see Sakua leaving with kanna dangling by her wrist in Sakua’s hand and desmand saying "hay!” Ok now Sakua and kanna are at the grand gate.” hay mind letting us pass "Sakua saying". "get out of here punk” the gate guard saying.” I was hoping you would say that, kanna if you would”. You see kanna kicking the guards (there are two) so they collide with each other and fall over" lets go "Sakua saying
