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The story of the film so far....
BEHOLD! MY ABILITY TO WRITE STORYS WILL NOW BE RECOGNIZED!
Naruto story excerpt
Ok, this is from my upcoming Naruto story. Thanks Kelly for letting my use Sakai!

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Shizukie ran along the battlement of the village to his cousin, Sakie. Shizukie witnessed her slam her elbow into the belly of a Sound Ninja.

" Still as fierce as ever" Shizukie commented.

" Finally! " Sakie shouted " We've been waiting for you forever " as she threw a Kunie at an oncomming ninja.

" Well, I got a little..... caught up. " Shizukie explained

" Whatever. I belive they're heading over there " She pointed to a building a little ways off.

" Right, lets go"

They took off running, meeting little resistance but a few Sound Ninja. As they approached the building they saw eight or nine ninja enter. They wern't ninja's from the Shadows.

When they got closer, two ninjas stayed back as the rest went in. They turned around and a purple shield popped up. Shizukie threw a kunie, but it didn't even scratch it.

" Are you thinking what I'm thinking? " Shizukie asked Sakie

" Ah, but of course. "

" Right. Genbu Kiden in my right hand " A black ball of energy formed in Shizukie's right hand

" Daigen Rawz in my left " A white ball of energy formed in Sakie's left hand

They two stood side to side and called out

GENBU KAIDEN-DIAGEN RAWZ! TWIN STRIKE OF THE SHADOWS AND THE LIGHT!

They're hands met and the two attacks met. The result was a devestating blast, a mix of black and white spiriling each other. When the attack the the shield, it crumbled and sent the two sound ninjas flying.

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So whatca think? let me know!






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Nozubozu
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commentCommented on: Fri Mar 02, 2007 @ 12:15am
awesome! xD even though I've already read it....and it's not Sakie...it's Sakai XD and ur welcome!


commentCommented on: Sun Mar 04, 2007 @ 11:45pm
cool dude make more!



Raiko Uchiha
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Tatsuno18
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commentCommented on: Thu Mar 08, 2007 @ 01:58am
hmm...pretty cool! xD I like it so far!


commentCommented on: Wed Mar 21, 2007 @ 10:30pm
FINALLY I READ IT!!! and... eek MAKE MORE!!!!!



xCorvx
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Asalyna
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commentCommented on: Sun May 06, 2007 @ 02:42pm
Thats really cool! biggrin


commentCommented on: Sun Jun 03, 2007 @ 04:07am
3nodding Keep it going Wasnt I an turtle hermit in your story?


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Raiko Uchiha
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commentCommented on: Wed Jun 06, 2007 @ 03:58pm
schweet!


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