girl with ...

• Artist: bleckkity
• Description: I wrote this one song impression
• Date: 09/02/2011
• Tags: girl with

You say that I am beautiful girl
And that you love me
But damet you din`t know about me nothing
My life is`nt fairy tale
I am a girl with a broken live
with a broken soul
but you swer that you love me
the wey I am.
I broke all I have,
And you will be next.

Comments

[Oakyia]

line 3 is confusing, comons are used in the wrong way. 2/5