Flame of Enchantment

• Artist: Jessie Bangs Hard
• Description: It's basically a passionate, steamy kind of poem with out being to explicit. It tells of a side of humans that all want something dangerous to thrill them... Results of being bored, enjoy!
  ~Jessie
• Date: 08/14/2011
• Tags: flame enchantment lust power sexy

Flame of Enchantment

We all want a dark romance,
We would all jump at the chance.
We want to be saved by a knight,
But there has to be a fight.
We don’t want to go easy,
That would be too cheesy.
We love to have a thrill,
We all enjoy that chill.
A few moments of aggression,
A little bit of compression.
A little tease of the lips,
I might even do a strip.
You can tell me what to do,
As long as you make the move.
Like I said,
Before this goes to your head.
We all enjoy a tease,
This can be your squeeze.
We all have a dark side,
We have to abide,
So come play a game with me,
Come be my devotee.

Comments

[Zailem]

Eh.. it's okay, but when making a poem that rhyms, try making the "tempo" fit. For instance, when you typed,
" We all have a dark side,
We have to abide,"
, it's obvious that "side" and "abide" rhym but in my opinion to make it work try adding a little more to the second verse. Beside that, everything else seems fine smile 3/5