Animal

• Artist: Ginger32195
• Description: uhm..... i made this a while ago, i think about hunting animals so yeah.
• Date: 08/06/2011
• Tags: animal

My claws tear from within me

As my eyes grow red

With anger

And with fear

I've become this animal from within

I've felt the pain of a bullet from inside

So come on and take me

As I'm put into this cage

I'll be up on the wall soon in your eyes

But just wait till I escape

I'll be free soon

Either by death

Or escape

Comments

[Ginger32195]

Thank you! ^_^

[Rainmarshall]

Really well done. I think It's make a better effect is instead of "Either by death or escape", you made it "Either by escape, or death". Still amazing writing. nice work.