Until

• Artist: Nui Kyrisa
• Description: ~Ever asked yourself this:
  How long could you wait?~
  This is my answer to that.
  
• Date: 05/28/2011
• Tags: love time life sign true

I could wait
Until my death,
Until my last breath,
Until light is no more.
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I'm saying a lie,
Though I know,
That I could and would
Do the things I can't.
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I'm still waiting
Until eternity fades,
Until the past drifts away,
Until everything's no more.

Comments

[Dolor Aeturnum Cassiel]

I like it. It's simple, small, and straight to the point (unlike alot of the poems I write). I like how you made the stanzas, each one a little triangle. Though I'm not entirely sure what you're saying here. Are you waiting for your love or death? 5 Stars. Keep up the good work!