You played a game.

• Artist: The_Chipphopper
• Description: I just don't know.
• Date: 01/26/2011
• Tags: played game

I stretch my arm out into the cold slicing wind,
It leaches the heat away from that limb,
you took my emotions and played a game,

white and black, black and white,
I thought which one am i?

I try to keep my arm out,
my pain gets stronger as i leave my logic behind and keep trying,
you thought it was funny to watch me get angry,

what can I do? what do I do?
I met you and found out,

my arm hangs with little life,
I gave you what i could and as much as i could,
you took my feelings and tore them apart,

Black and white, white and black,
I know now which one I am,
you know that you like black most of all.

Comments

[IMPALER_PRINCE]

Decent lines. The first stanza was quite nice. I noticed some missing punctuation in your first couplet (2nd stanza) and a blatant disregard for the capitalization of "I". Anyway, rate me back if you wish. :3