running on empty

• Artist: Kier Dishonored
• Description:
• Date: 01/24/2011
• Tags: running empty

its too warm too safe
i look in the mirror and my face
the mist rises and covers reflection
hiding the fact its not perfection

i look up high and see the moon
i know the sun will come out soon
another day has gone by
as i observe and look to the sky

winter came and summer gone
time moves fast am i wrong?
rain pours the ice thaw
spring leaves people in awe

i do nothing only see
as everything changes around me
i grow old i grow weak
as i look for for the dream i seek

no hope for tomorrow
it will be the same
as my hope runs empty
day after day

Comments

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trying too hard to rhyme can screw up your poem, making it look like the rhyme is the only important thing. if you decide to rhyme, try alotting a certain number of syllables to each line, like in a haiku.