Mutiny

• Artist: sweet lost Lanore
• Description: Dreams
• Date: 01/09/2011
• Tags: mutiny dreams

My dreams are a mutiny
I dream of her and not of him
Of them but not of you
Why must my dreams be a mutiny?
Defying my simple heart

My dreams are a mutiny
I see not those visions I wish
Nor those who’s love I so desire
Why must my dreams be a mutiny?
Defying my simple heart

Comments

[vardofive]

So great. Needs some polishing but you've certainly got a fantastic start. "My dreams are a mutiny" is a great line. So is "defying my simple heart". Very excellent i just thing you should rework it a little bit.