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God is the mind
Sky is the will
Clouds are the feelings and,
Rain is the blood
Earth is the body
Hell is evil
Heaven is devine
And wind breathes the soul into all
when all thou comes to one,
A human is created.
(hope you like it)
- by Hot happyme |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 12/29/2010 |
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- Title: Humans
- Artist: Hot happyme
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Description:
A composition i came up in my free time. hope you guys like it.
My first times sending something to the art arena - Date: 12/29/2010
- Tags: humans
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- Hot happyme - 01/01/2011
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hell is evil and heaven is divine is to show that we humans have both good and evil in our heart. But what determines is in which side you wish to act upon is what people will see you as good or evil.
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- Overworkedandunderpaid - 12/31/2010
- It was reall flowing well right up until 'Hell is evil' - uh... what does this have to do with the poem? Get rid of the two lines about heaven and hell and it would work better, I think.
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