Sanity

• Artist: Akanu Eir Nightmaris
• Description:
• Date: 11/05/2010
• Tags: sanity

"What is sanity?"
"For I do not know that name."
"Is it the raven over a corps?"
"Or is it TV stars fame?"

"What is sanity?"
"For I do not know that name."
"Is it the hat woman int really tiny shorts?"
"Or is it the rich man watching a child go lame?"

"What is sanity?"
"For I do not know that name."
"Is it my brother who thinks he is the king of hearts?"
"Or is it the poor asking for the same?"

"All I know is Insanity!"
"For it is the chaos that I live in."
"And Believe me its more fun."
"To be mad as a hatter in an insane asylum!"

"...But that's just me."

Comments

[Akanu Eir Nightmaris]

hey i wrote this over 3 years ago

[Xxfallen midnight angelxX]

I like this poem. I do think that you shouldn't have everything in dialoque because when I started to read only the first quatrain, I thought two people were talking. I think that this should have more details on sane people. I know you have it in you to write a little more. I don't think you should have "To be mad as a hatter." This sadly is now what I call a cliche'. I do apologize if you take this the wrong way dear.