Marinated in Sorrow.

• Artist: rosebud4200
• Description: A rrly emo poem i just wrote :D
  
  Sorry its so emo... I was bored.
• Date: 10/13/2010
• Tags: marinated sorrow

I sat in my room
Looking at the broken dreams
In that little dream bubble of Woe.
Cutting at my wrists
Hoping all my worries would go away
When all I need to do
Is go away.
Far away from all the drama
Break my phone, no more.
Go insane with pleasure
And live out my life
In heaven.

Comments

[azaycer]

Well paced and relevant but lacking the emotion powerful enough to portray the experience of slashing open your skin and letting the blood run free, escaping from your body like a mass murderer breaking out of prison, would give you 3.5 if I could but you aren't quite at a 4 yet so 3/5 it is.