Broken #2

• Artist: Jam_Luv_Fire
• Description: I edited the last stanza on my first "Broken" poem and I personaly think this version's better but...yeah ^^
• Date: 09/04/2010
• Tags: broken

Tears and pain have weakened me,
There's a hole in my chest were my heart should be,
Day after day the tears I cry,
Only make me wanna' die,
Because the thought of me without you
Is un-real, un-true.

I guess you and me arn't too bad,
Besides the fact I'm always sad,
I wish this wouldn't hurt so much,
Now all I need is your gentle touch,
If I ever made you feel this way,
I couldn't live another day.

I know I said forever and always,
But life has left me in a daze
My mind is cloudy I can't think,
Don't pretend we have a link,
Would you ever care for me,
If anything bad came to be?

Comments

[Jam_Luv_Fire]

Lol, personaly I liek the last stanza on this one better than the original one I did ^_^

[Delightful_Indigo]

Still luv it! biggrin