darkness

• Artist: werewolf babe
• Description: this iz one of my badly written poems......comment me tell me wat you think its about a wolf hiding in the night.....for food.....idk if youll get it o well comment
• Date: 07/24/2010
• Tags: darkness wolves

hello darkness, my old friend,
i've come to talk to you again,
to see ur stars and moonless nights
oh how they give people a fright,
or when the moon is shining bright
oh what good times we have
when were scaring people to death
and how my wolf senses grow as i go in for the blow
and how you hide me so well so my belly is full
so i thank you my friend and goodbye is not the end for tomorrow when my belly is empty i'll call upon you once again....

Comments

[MasterZodiac89]

the first part reminds me of a song i heard before. The "hello darkness, my old friend" part. but i cant remember from where. 4/5

[sheptenmaru]

not bad i like it. its good. not the greatest thing I've read. but I'm sure sure your other poems are good