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When days are lost, I weep and lye,
When first glance, beauty and terror.
Forever more, untill I die,
Thoughts of your love, my fatal error.
Like the moon your mystery, something strange I can't resist.
You bring me joy, you bring me pain,
A puzzle to be solved, and yet I wounder, do you even know I exist?
My heart soaked in tears washed away in rain,
Forever more, to dull the pain, here I lye,
In my own made up worlds, far away, where our love is recognised.
In worlds were beauty never fades, where imagination kisses the sky.
A place where our love can never die.
Far away our love is carried.
I weep to know it's true.
Untill I am barried,
Sweet kisses my thoughts are of you.
Forever more my love for here I lye.
Forever more I lye and weep, my heart you keep
Untill my days are lost, forever more untill I die.
- by Ignis Lykra |
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- | Submitted on 07/17/2010 |
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- Title: Untill I Die,
- Artist: Ignis Lykra
- Description: Okay this is my first true poem. Sure I've written others but those were for school, and stuff. I write stories also (I'm better at stories) but never submitted a story. So I figure I might as well try my hand at poetry. Hopefully you guys like it. Please, please comment on it. I seriously appricate feedback, even if it is critisicm, thank you!
- Date: 07/17/2010
- Tags: untill death
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Comments (1 Comments)
- EmoChild360 - 07/26/2010
- lots of spelling mistakes, but, other than that, a very nice poem. 5.
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