love sux

• Artist: Abby Cadabby515
• Description: its a poem that explains how i feel about love. it hurts, and i gotta put out my feelings
• Date: 06/09/2010
• Tags: love

love sux!
luve sux lyk pain sux
luve can be so strong, nd then u break
luve is nuttin but hurt
luve is nuttin that u can make

luve sux lyk the worst nightmare
luve can be so happy, then it turns into hell
luve is nuttin but a figure of mind
luve is sumin people go and tell

luve is signed by a heart
luve can not be your choice, its everyones choice
luve is nuttin but pain
and that is why luve sux!
by: broken hearted abbygail hoback-thompson

Comments

[bigggie]

luv dont suk its beach

[Abby Cadabby515]

thank you! nv thoght i would get a comment lyk dat. lol, thing is, im only 12, lol. you can chek out my other stuff as well, 3 stories

[freed_arrest]

I personally thought this poem was hilarious. If you want to pretend like you're analyzing it, one could always put off the crap spelling and say that the authors hatred for love is so strong that the off grammar is used to show us the authors tone regarding the poem which is written satirically. (Sorry for the long comment...it's in my nature after taking two college level English classes...) Props to you!

[Abby Cadabby515]

yeah, i no. amber told me yesterday razz

[md1atlas22]

abby, next time, spell things correctly. you'll be hated and rated badly because of that :

[Abby Cadabby515]

sry this poem sux ppl