Don't Ask

• Artist: kurushimi94
• Description: Just a poem I wrote a while back...
• Date: 06/07/2010
• Tags: dont

Don't ask me how I'm feeling
Because I'll just say "okay"
But really it says nothing
On how i feel today
Don't ask me what I'm thinking
On what's going through my brain
If only you got a taste you'd think i was insane
Don't ask me what I'm saying
Or why i talk at all
I'm just reminding myself I can speak
As I walk through the empty hall
Because you could see it too
If you'd only open your eyes
But right now you haven't got a clue
Don't ask me what I'm doing
You wouldn't understand
I'm just waiting for "The End"
seeing all the chaos at hand

Comments

[Yan Qi]

Really nice! I love the rhythm and the rhyme. The meaning behind it is brilliant! The ending line seems a little out of place. I think that the second to last line would make a better ending. Overall, I really like this! 5/5

[kurushimi94]

thank you shanra =D

[Shanra the Dragon Bard]

I actually like that Kuru. I could see a song being made out of it.