The Hawk An Edgar A.P. Tribute

• Artist: Moonlight Scream
• Description: Its a tribute to the man Edgar Allan Poe who is a hero to all poets
• Date: 04/10/2010
• Tags: hawk edgar tribute

The Hawk
Wide Wings Spread through the sky
Kissing the Sun,
Running on the Wind
Then the Wind Disappears
The sun Turns Black
Taken Away as you fall
Then Your Wings, your mind and your heart turns to stone
As your fall the the Cold heartless pillar called...
The World
and in that instant
You Die

Comments

[Echo Ligeia]

Very nice use of images and diction. A few spelling mistakes and typos could be corrected. Also, the poem may be improved by giving a sense of why the eagle is falling: what have they done, or something like that.