Life.

• Artist: XxXx D I N O S A U R xXxX
• Description: How i used to see life, when i was depressed and sad. my ex-best friend said she liked it so i decided to post it on here.
• Date: 04/05/2010
• Tags: life

-in a world full of hate, no one has yur back.
-yu trust no one, not even family.
-things change, yur not sure what yu want.
-yu make mistakes, and people hold grudges.
-yu cant be happy, just sad.
-tears flow, yu find physical pain better than tears.
-yu make one bad decision, yur life is ruined.
-yur all alone, yu have no one.
-yu try to change, but yu get pulled back to yur old ways.
-yu give it yur all, and yu lose power.

Comments

[XxXx D I N O S A U R xXxX]

yeah. i spell you like yu. sorry. i do know how to spell tho.

[Bye-Bye-Crow]

Nice poem ,but next time you should probably check you're poem to see if you spelled everything correctly, i can only give you a 3/5.
I feel like a teacher. biggrin (Grading)