Someone Once Told Me

• Artist: museIndian
• Description: This is a poem I wrote today, I was sitting in my english class and technically this was an assignment but I loved it so much I thought I'd put it up here.
  
  Hope you like and any constructive criticism would be nice, if you are just here to bash on me please go elsewhere and know all of your comments will be deleted.
  
  I also have this in my journal 'cuz I wasn't sure if I wanted it up here in the arena...but here it is!! lol :D
• Date: 03/17/2010
• Tags: someone once told

Someone once told me
That I'm like the sun with clouds,
Showing the highlights and even the darkest shadows
Of my being.

Someone once told me
That I brighten their day with a beautiful smile.
That I have a feather light touch
Which makes that certain Someone's
Heart run wild.

Someone once told me
That I'm beautiful and smart,
And always caring
For those I know.

I am, however,
Of a different opinion.

I don't see
All those beautiful wonderful things.

All I see
Is a lonely little girl
Trying her hardest
Not to stay that way.

I don't see anything beautiful
Or smart.
What I see
Is the sun inside of me
Completely shadowed
By the darkest clouds.

But Someone once told me
All of these things.
And with all of my being,
I want to believe.

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