Don't laugh your Joking

• Artist: DrDings
• Description: This is a Haiku set about two lovers grown apart.
  
  The last line of the previous stanza is used to create the first line of the next stanza.
• Date: 02/10/2010
• Tags: dont laugh your joking

Don’t laugh, you're joking

Ready, willing and able

Strewn like roadside trash


Strewn like roadside trash

Old and forgotten we were

One old friend now gone


One old friend now gone

We used to love each other

Without any fault


Without any fault

We would come and go like spring

Seasons are changing


Seasons are changing

Always coming together

Pulling us away


Pulling us away

Always trying to listen

Cannot hear a thing


Cannot hear a thing

We were never listening

And apart we grew


And apart we grew

Laughing at our dreamless love

Don’t laugh, you're joking

Comments

[STCS]

Great! Reminds of DBSK's Unforgettable.

[EmoKisses-x]

Beautiful,
and a creative way to write the stanzas :]
5/5