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Sitting on a concrete floor,
So cold i wait,
Though sunlight dots the room,
Emotions i feel no more,
My body numb and sore,
A haze surronds my vison,
An empty shell,
Nothing more..
- by ColorblndKelidescope |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 01/09/2010 |
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- Title: Fading away..
- Artist: ColorblndKelidescope
- Description: wrote this to kind sum up what was going on in my mind about my life then
- Date: 01/09/2010
- Tags: fadingaway
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- ColorblndKelidescope - 01/22/2010
- lol the i was a mistake thx for poining it out ^^
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- lil pixy girl - 01/21/2010
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That's like a parody to me...everything is so fast and bussy at the moment, wish it would slow down a bit.
Loved the irregular rhyming pattern btw!
Was the small case 'i' meant to mean you feel unimportant, or was that a mistake? - Report As Spam
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