Every step of the way, love.

• Artist: Brooklay
• Description: Haha, I wrote this thinking about Severus, yes, from Harry Potter, I'm a huge fan, and..yeah,ifyou've read the books (mainly 'Harry Potter and the Deathly Hallows' chapter thirty three "The Prince's Tale") You'll understand. :D Thanks
• Date: 12/24/2009
• Tags: every step love snape

The pain is uncontrollable,
unbearable;
We must grow strong,
To defeat from within,
Because, my love, I am with you
Every step of the way,
Even if your not with me;
Your memory lingers on,
In that note you wrote,
Weather your love was sent to me
Or my ememy.
But girl, your son, he shall go on
I will protect so he shall triumph;
All will be well, and we shall be together in death.
Even if, in death, your with him

Comments

[I-hit-you-in-your-face]

are allowing that man to die. He for one, is my favorite Snape. In his honor, I will let his character that I love leave. If he comes back, well, Ill just have to keep trying. (He is my favorite character too.) 5 stars but please, try to remeber that other side of Snape.

[I-hit-you-in-your-face]

While I do admire your writing choice, and your ingenious taste in books, I think you sort hae missed that hard hitting that edge the character Proffesor Snape has. Severus means to decapitate which I think is incredibly acurate to the poor Proffesor Snape, but, yes, it is as though we all have forgotten the despicable Snape, for that Severus is my favorite. How dare we love the greasy haired, tall, hooked nose horrible person we have all come to know and hate? Jo Rowling is an visionary and we

[Brooklay]

Its cliche? May I ask what I did to make it cliche? Just so that I don't do it again?

[Fille aux Cheveux de Lin]

Chliche<! I don't like it at all.

[Brooklay]

Thank you biggrin

[ReignOblytehria]

..... :sniff sniff: that was true poetry .... its really, REALLY good!