Thoughts Of A Soldier

• Artist: Lithumn
• Description: Written last night at like 3 in the morning.
  
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  For everyone who keeps on, even when the odds are stacked against them.
  
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• Date: 12/23/2009
• Tags: thoughts soilder marching fighting carrying

This disease has taken you as the host
The thing that bothers you the most, is the name attachment
Its insane but everyone's content with saying your not able
So you decide to take the label and flip the table
Saying your weak and everyone else is strong?
you laugh and push past, holding your head all the while long
Saying you should sleep, sound steady in your situation?
you do the opposite, bond only to your determination
when asked, 'Why? Surely you see there's something wrong?'
you reply, 'There's no time to cry - soldiers carry on!'

Comments

[GotChicken]

*thoughts
Whoops. Great job by the way! =]

[GotChicken]

Interesting.. I've never looked into the thoughs of a soldier once. I learn something new everyday (: 5/5

[reptileluver101]

*too
Typo, sorry.

[reptileluver101]

I like it(:
It was really touching to, and I know this sounds stupid, but my grandpa was a WWII Veteran and I know that's how he would have felt. This touched me(: