Tick Tock

• Artist: 2Smexi Lexi2
• Description: I tried 2 explain in this poem my feelings and how time is passing by 2 fast
• Date: 12/21/2009
• Tags: tick tock ticktock lexi

Tick tock goes the clock ill b dead b4 bed …b4 said
Tick tock goes the clock as my heart slowly cracks bigger and bigger
Tick tock goes the clock when you hug me tight and you kiss my forehead
Tick tock goes the clock 1 last time… before I say goodbye
But the hands on the clock wont move

Because I love you

Comments

[arcadian98]

I wouldn't use chatspeak in poems. This isn't MSN, and we're not chatting. It'd be easier to read if 'before' and 'be' were spelled correctly, and you used '...'s instead of commas, which is another no-no. I like the concept, though. You could've pulled this off a lot better.

[i-DarkFairy]

most wouldnt understand but i do =]