with you

• Artist: Doc_of_the_mist
• Description: i met a girl recently and i made this song for her
  
  she doesnt know its for her but she heard it
• Date: 11/25/2009
• Tags: love

If I could make a wish I think id pass
You alone are all I need

Being with you has left me
Happy peaceful and elated

Cant you see why there’s
Nothing left automated
Magical or of worth

That could make me anymore happy
Than playing with your hair
Making love on the beaches turf
Or simply embracing you

But in the midst of all this delight
Doubts begin to cause strife
Insecurity breaches in

Do you feel for me nearly as much
I feel the need for you

But when I look in to your eyes
Or feel your touch
The doubt disappears

Cause in your eyes I see the words
I love you to

Comments

[Doc_of_the_mist]

i asked her out and she said no and that i was the biggest loser shes ever met *sigh*

[f u m o k ii]

the message of the poem is understandable, but try revising the grammar if you're still working on this :] overall, very emotional and amazing~

[Doc_of_the_mist]

and please comment!

[Doc_of_the_mist]

by recently i mean a month ago