Darker Side

• Artist: blood foot
• Description: This is just a stupid poem I wrote during school,its about the old me, i used to be a terrible person and as I grew up I realized I didn't want to be the way I was,but there are still some people who only she the Darker side of me,Thank you for reading and please rate.
• Date: 11/20/2009
• Tags: darker side

Darker Side Of Me

Darker side of me,
is all you can see,
Don't you know it's
not the real me,
That was not the way,
I wanted to be.

Darker side of me,
Show them how it is,
to be me,
even if they can't see,
They way I seem to be

Comments

[pollysmiles101]

Don't say it's stupid, 'cause it's not. Believe me, I've been reading, writing, and rating poems all my life and a stupid poem is when someone uses the old cliche..."Roses are red...violets are blue...." But that was not at all stupid. That was really good 'cause you portrayed what you wanted to, and that's all that matters. Come read my poems sometime if you want to see what I mean.