im sorry

• Artist: St _Christopher7491
• Description: a short break up poem i wrote about 3 months ago. please no bad comments
• Date: 11/08/2009
• Tags: sorry

only three things last forever
sorrow, love, and death
so I’m sorry I can’t love you
until my dying breath

I’m sorry that I can’t
hold your hand forever
my heart has turned to stone
from a light and fluffy feather

Comments

[St _Christopher7491]

i can try to smile

[DDrox316]

I really like it, but it seems like it just ends... could you add one more line at the end? or maybe reverse the last two lines...? I don't know which you prefer, but this makes more sense to me...