What im I Looking For

• Artist: AMirrors
• Description: Its a poem of somebody looking for something, but do they really want it.. they are lost in life and need somebody to help....
• Date: 11/07/2009
• Tags: looking

What im I looking for
I don't even know
A meaning for living
A meaning for dieing

What im I looking for
A guy to love me
A girl to want me
I don't even know

What im I look for
I don't even know
Waiting for something

What im I looking for

Wait i got it
But how can I have it when i don't know what I have...

Im lost, i don't know what im looking for...i need some body to found me...
So they can help me found what im looking for...

Comments

[ZeroChanceOfSurvival]

good, but u might need a litter grammar fix...

when you said "i need some body to found me" and "help me found what i'm looking for" i think u need the word FIND. found sounds wrong and is wrong.

if u would have fixed that it would have been 4/5 (becuz this really makes no sense) so ill give u 3/5

well done biggrin

[vonnsilva]

Hmm...what you should look for is someone to teach you how to write.