ON BIRDS AND LOVERS

• Artist: UC Poika
• Description: A poem for lovers about lovebirds and lovers.
• Date: 10/27/2009
• Tags: birds lovers

ON BIRDS AND LOVERS
UC Poika




A songbird sings, unseen, not distracted by the things
That lovers know there beneath the boughs below
As they look into eyes that see into their own hearts
And hold each others’ hands, touching only what is real
Oblivious to the songs the songbird sings
To his mate, a bird lover covered by leaves that grow
To know just how and why the loving part starts
And find what Adams and Eves will always feel
When together they choose to hide their ways from all
Of those they think wouldn’t understand what they share
As in each others’ arms they gladly fall
Aground, unseen, not distracted by anyone there;
But lovers love, songbirds sing and love
Goes on for both no matter whether on earth or just above.

Comments

[FuriazFTW]

I'm liking the references in here. You don't see many of those nowadays. And while there were a few dead words in this poem, I think it was very touching. Overall? I'd give it a 4/5. A good poem! smile

[critic-the-homeless]

luv it! That would be a great poem for someone you love! hey, check out my new stories and songs.