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ʁising ωith ҭhə ƒαℓℓεη:
Looking out upon the land...I see trees...
So many trees.
sure, They're different, but How can I tell?
HOW can ANYONE?!
they're all the same.
No differentiation!
and as i am slowly falling...
THEY CRASH, they disappear!
Slowly, one by one...gone...
The Followers....completely gone...
Now, they come together, they join me...
The Survivors...
They know how to live,
To Survive
As do I
together we Thrive
Survive
we survive
We, The Fallen
Rising up!
together,
We,
The Fallen
- by Fallen_to_Ashes12 |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 10/20/2009 |
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- Title: Rising With the Fallen
- Artist: Fallen_to_Ashes12
- Description: I've been told this is really good, and i could win contests with it, so please PLEASE tell me what you think I'll comment/rate back
- Date: 10/20/2009
- Tags: rising with fallen
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Comments (2 Comments)
- grrr~Kitty~grrr - 10/20/2009
- I like it, it's different, and a little strange, but in a good way.
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- domeXD - 10/20/2009
- who ever told you that was right, this piece is quite good. i find my self trying to make it more complex than it is tho, i dont quite know why.. i assume its about fallen leaves tho.. followers and survivors, i like these parts.. and the little rhyme towards the end.. ty for sharing :]
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