Sera fin?

• Artist: x_X Zeros_Bloody_Rose X_x
• Description: Just part of a story that I've been thinking about written in a poemish format... The pauses and breaks are deliberate; I enjoy an awkward reading ^_^ This is the mindset of a boy named Christian in a relationship with a girl named Sarah Dominique Serafin a.k.a. Bella... If it's not obvious, she's a vampyrish mix...>.> lolz This poem is not completed, but I would like to know what you think of it so far... Please leave comments with constructive criticism. Thank you and enjoy!
• Date: 10/06/2009
• Tags: serafin bellachica sarah vampire

She's always quite alone
lips stained a fierce purple-black... stitched over with thinning thread
fangs, piercings, silver, contrast ever so nicely
burning scars adorn her body, lovely shades of red
blood lust always present in her eyes... chocolate brown and an icy breath-taking blue
dark brown ringlets tied back loosely into pig tails... you're there within my reach...
what would I become without you?
turning nightmare... it's my reality

I find my thoughts traveling to her...
so very beautiful, bathed in moonlight
we hugged, she trembled at my touch...
soft pale skin turning black
finding fresh tattoos forming in my finger's wake...
her eyes piercing mine...
the air filled with lonely sighs