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In this planet I am in
I just came to vist but now I dred it
I come here and see what it is really made of
People killing eachother every day
Crying and sorrow everywhere
Another one getting dumped I see
I like it better back on my home planet
Theres no polution and everyone is nice
In this world you get made fun of
For just about everything
I wish i could leave but I have to wait for my mom
I wonder what this planet would be like in the future
Will this planet ever get better?
Now that my mom is finally here its time to say good-bye
And hope next time i come back this planet will be better
- by the rainbow potato freak |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 09/17/2009 |
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- Title: In this world
- Artist: the rainbow potato freak
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Description:
i was feelin sorta depressed and this is how i would express the world if i came from another planet
I mean its very sad whats happening today
and i always wonder will it ever get better?
hope you like its
rate and comment please!!!
~P.S. im bad at spelling so sorry if i spelt anything wrong~ - Date: 09/17/2009
- Tags: planetiamin
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Comments (2 Comments)
- xX Night Fox Xx - 09/22/2009
- Some people just look at the words like this guy, but I understand it's meaning and feel what you feel. I always dream of waking up from this world to a better one.
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- Chocolate Willy - 09/18/2009
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You need to work on this...
Too literal...too elementary..
Make it deeper - Report As Spam
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