bill 'n phil

• Artist: Emzyle
• Description: hee hee i wrote this when i was like 9. i didnt know a lot about poetry, so i know how original it is. My mom helped a little. enjoy!
• Date: 08/27/2009
• Tags: bill phil pickle dill

there once was an elf named bill
who had a pickle of dill
he took a bite
then squeeled with delite
"i'll save this for later" said bill

So bill saved his pickle of dill
and went for a walk up a hill
but he fell right down
and broke his crown
"i need my pickle" said bill

into the fridge went bill
to find his pickle of dill
he came down
and said with a frown
"WHO ATE MY PICKLE OF DILL?!"

Bill looked to his friend phil
"did you eat my pickle of dill?"

"yes" said phil

Comments

[cre8ive_ovadose]

i like it, it's kinda random and because of it, funny. to me at least 5/5 ^^ smile