the one i love

• Artist: Dante Ayala
• Description: this is for you sydney my love
• Date: 08/23/2009
• Tags: love

i dearly love her to death as i always do something to make her sad i cry and sit alone in the dark as i see her beautiful face as the glowing star shines lighter as i see the light i see an Angels i see you sydney you are the only love that i want and need the only girl that i feel perfect for there may not be a thing call perfect but i say it perfect i love you forever and ever sydney morris you are my true love i never want to lose you to anyone or anything my hearts only sing when i see your angels smile and i be laughing and smiling as your face make my heart warm and dance i sing my heart out for you i love you and only sydney morris Forever and ever..

Comments

[-Eddie The Rebel-]

Nice imma copy you. 5/5

[IcyJizz]

I loved it. Very sweet and all but like soul said, dont make it into a paragraph xD 5/5 <3

[x_iNikki x3]

Very sweet, and it gets the message across.
But try to not write poetry into a paragraph.
The interest will be lost.
Other than that very good, 5//5.

[Lady Erotica]

this is very sweet but uhh u should stop making it to a paragraph >w< very hard to read but other than that 5/5 !! :p oh and spell check (sorry, but i had to add that part) >w>

[Somnium Ayala]

Not the best literacy but the message got across I think! =] 5/5