Could You?

• Artist: Sir Wolfhound
• Description:
• Date: 08/23/2009
• Tags: could

could you step into my shoes?
live the life that i lead?
could you handle the pressure?
the down falls? physically,emotionailly.
it never quits or even dulls to a faint touch of
the flame that cant be put out.
could you handle it?could you smile and just take it all in?
couldyo even stand with the weight of fear crushing every
inch of effort your able to shoot back?
could you handle the disappointment the shame?
could you even take in the reality?
but dont shed a tear ,dont show weakness
COULD YOU if so then welcome to my life.

Comments

[littlemisslost_x]

Very nice, although perhaps a spellcheck and some formatting would do you good. It detracts from the whole effect. If it weren't for that I'd give you 4/5 but that brings it back to a 2.. so I'll compromise and rate a 3 (: