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A petal falls silently towards the ground--
Its shadow increasing in largeness.
The petal finally feels the moist earth.
It settles in,
All comfortable and gentle.
And suddenly, the shadow is gone.
Gone
Like everything in the universe eventually
- by -Dimension XIII- |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 08/23/2009 |
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- Title: Gone
- Artist: -Dimension XIII-
- Description: I can't really think of a name (A petal? Gone? Shadow? I like Shadow most but Gone would make more sense to me.) There's no real form of poetry here (no patterns, correct stanzas, etc).
- Date: 08/23/2009
- Tags: gone petal shadow
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Comments (6 Comments)
- LinkinParkRules123 - 08/24/2009
- I hate you people
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- The Misery Of Life - 08/24/2009
- ^.^
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- -Dimension XIII- - 08/23/2009
- And for readers out there, the last line is white so highlight it!~ ^ ^
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- -Dimension XIII- - 08/23/2009
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@Heartless AzNbOi: OMGEE!!!!!!!!!!~ THE WORLD IS COMING TO AN END T^T.
@_xkookie_monsterx_: Thanks, but out of my three submissions, I really didn't like this one. >.> - Report As Spam
- Heartless AzNbOi - 08/23/2009
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it's a nice poem
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- _xkookie_monsterx_ - 08/23/2009
- nice xD
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