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The room was empty
and the door sealed closed.
I hid away so it won't show,
The fear in my eye's.
No one comes in,
No one comes out.
Nobody here so I can shout,
My anger towards the world.
My pain unending,
My thoughts disturbed.
I pass away without a word...
- Title: One Eye Closed.
- Artist: AtoMixxer
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Description:
Something I made off the top of my head.
Enjoy :D - Date: 08/22/2009
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Comments (2 Comments)
- XxMonsterous MeganxX - 10/09/2009
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Yeah i agree with Starlight.
Its good,
but would be better if it was longer.
I still like it(: - Report As Spam
- Starlight_Miss - 08/22/2009
- Interesting. You should continue it with another verse, it would be great if it was a little longer. But it's good. 4/5. Please rate back.
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