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I was told true love waits,
But I think I was told to late,
Many boys broke my heart,
Then there was this one boy who I thought could be mine,
Life was unfair and took him away,
Now I'm falling into darkness,
Screaming for someone to help me,
But like always nobody hears my crys,
Will I ever come back out,
As I go farther down into darkness?
- by Dolphin_girl0150 |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 08/18/2009 |
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- Title: Unfair Life
- Artist: Dolphin_girl0150
- Description: my life has always been unfair to me even with love.
- Date: 08/18/2009
- Tags: unfair life
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- Dolphin_girl0150 - 09/13/2009
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- ElectraShocked - 08/18/2009
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It looses its flow at the last sentance. If you fix it, it wouls be 10x better than it already is smile .
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