Jealousy

• Artist: Skyraa
• Description: just a poem i wrote like foreverrrr ago.
• Date: 08/13/2009
• Tags: jealousy

A Terrible Tale Titled Jealousy...
This is the curse which has befallen me.
It's walls close in around my prone rigid body.
I cannot see nor can I breathe
As my fragile figure is squeezed into a tidal wave of
envy.
The eye of a hurricane from deep in my heart draws nearer...
as I flail helplessly against.
chained.
Caught in a queer form of limbo from which I can not escape.
And I am dragged downward
'tword a sword of dark and a thought of jealousy.

Comments

[Toe-Tappingly Tragic]

This is actually kind of good.. And I tend to be overly-critical of poetry, even my own. Most submissions onto Gaia are mediocre or written with the skill of a middle schooler who's in intensive English but this is surprisingly good.