goodbye

• Artist: vampiretilldeath---
• Description: ....its more of a note to somone
• Date: 08/11/2009
• Tags: goodbye

i sit in my mind thinking what to do
i sure as hell cant trust you
when i told you my dreams you laughed
im leaving today
i wont be coming back
i dont need you bringing me down
the time has come for me to go
and find somone who will beilive in me
and all my dreams
and find somone who will be there when i need them
when i need them the most
so im going to find that somone
and im going for good
i cant save myself when all you do is hurt me
your holding me back
i cant fly when you cut of my wings
so this is goodbye

Comments

[UC Poika]

Don't let anybody do that to you. welll said but is it poety or prose in poetic form? It's a question I keep asking myself. Great narrative though either way.

[Xx-Forgotten Mist-xX]

as sad as it is i can tell where ur coming from and if u want me to judge it on poetry itself i would give a 4/5 but sins i see the deaper meaning then 5/5

[Sins of the Dying]

alex...........

[Sonakatharsis]

Alex please don't do it! crying i still care about you! i'll break up with Dyl, if it will make you feel better anything please! I love you, don't do it!