lost

• Artist: Saukio
• Description: may15
• Date: 08/09/2009
• Tags: lost tripping drowning strayed

lost
in red-rimmed eyes
and thigh high thoughts

tripping
over wrong words
and balled up time

drowning
in coloured memories
and potential bled through

strayed
down some street or other
thoughts unto foggy distance

©2009 ~i-lie
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Comments

[Intrepid Indigo]

I liked it quite a bit, I like how you started each stanza with a verb-thingy, don't understand the phrase thigh high thoughts, pls enlighten me, I like the rest, the piece has great potential.