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It's been a while,
since we last spoke.
I dial her number,
but when she picks up i feel like i'm about to choke.
My love for her still strolls in my head,
even if she doesn't want me,
or just simply wants me dead.
I can't help the feeling that what she did was wrong,
walking in his house with nothing but a thong.
But I still can't just walk away,
throwing away everything with nothing to say.
A part of me wants her back,
the other wants her to grab her clothes and pack.
These mixed feelings that I have,
makes me both mad,
sad,
and glad...
Knowing that everything was special in the love we had.
I told her we would talk tommorow,
knowing that it would only be heartbreak, tears, and sorrow.
I practice in the mirror,
just to practice my heartfull speech,
then after that I went to bed and dreamed of her in my sleep.
Hoping that tommorow will be a better day,
Thinking whether my feelings will go,
or will they stay.
The thought in my head that made me want to die,
will I get a welcoming hello,
or a lonely goodbye...
-To Be Continued
- Title: The Lonely Goodbye part 1
- Artist: Le Kashi
- Description: I wrote this after the sad times with my ex. We had many problems on our last week together, and these thoughts could only go through my head....
- Date: 08/03/2009
- Tags: lonely goodbye
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Comments (4 Comments)
- xXxOrGAZZmic_ObsessionxXx - 08/30/2009
- wow this is weird... going threw something simalir right now (not sure if i did the right thing). but i like it, nice rythm, has emotion and power, tells a story and it can realate to alot of people. good job +5
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- princessii101 - 08/09/2009
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Went through a simlilar situation too * not a good feeling at all*
This poem is really great...Looking foward to part 2 - Report As Spam
- NanashiYoshi - 08/03/2009
- I love the rhyming and its an excellent story. Cant wait for the next one! ^.^ and im sorry you had to go through that. sad
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